pretty rock on. I like the soft colours you used and the scene in itself but, there's a bar and not enough drunk people.

I think you could have introduced some more texture to the picture.

how i do to leave my car in this parking lot?! theres no entrance... :... again i see the problem with swimming pools in the roof... there no space in the floor under the swimming pool....
you can introduce hightlights too... is very good to make the things looks like 3d...